Monday, June 8, 2020

Final Project - An Ending to Tolkien's The Fall of Arthur

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How Arthur pursued Mordred to the setting of the sun

Arthur westward     in arms purposed,
high helms of traitors     hewed in victory
and sunlit shores     at Romeril secured.
For war wished he not,     and wept for his land
torn asunder by     traitorous intent.
Thriftless ambition     and treason high,
larger in fault than     Lancelot,
more was the malevolence     grown in Mordred.
Guinever’s fate     guessed he not,
freedom found      in her father’s lands.
Again for Ban’s kin     Arthur wished
yet Gawain in counsel     constant remained,
staunch bonds now broken    and brothers slain.
Treason he feared     yet more turmoil felt
for Gareth and Gaheris     he greatly loved
and loss still he felt     at Lancelot’s hand.

Arthur’s army     arose with the dawn,
waking early     and waxing in strength.
Arms and armor     adorned they with
greaves and gauntlets     glimmering in sun.
Bold was their purpose     for battle preparing
yet cold morning light     found Mordred not
for cunning was the caitiff,     in cowardice fled
of Arthur his king     he was afeared
and no less of Gawain      who in glory was highest.
Westward the traitors went     as the night waned
‘gainst the sun     in glory rising
in the east     where the enemy lay.

Gawain arrayed in gold     glorious as the sun
cursed the cowards     and his kindred sought
puissant and purposeful     they pursued the foe.
Counsel kept he not,     nor to Arthur cleft
but on great Guingalot     to war galloped.
Lothian’s men     the van lead
under strong sun     stormed they west
its fire following,     foes to slay.

Swords first struck     at the sun’s height
Galuth glinting     amidst battle’s gore.
Long fought Lot’s kin    true sons of Lothian,
grim Gawain among them     ever the greatest,
king’s kinsmen against     craven traitors fought
ere to battle arrived     Arthur and his men
who in caution kept     in camp too long.
Wrathful was Gawain     but in strength waning
as the sun low in sky hung     streaking red the clouds
bloody above as below     lay the battlefield.



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The setting of the sun and with it Sir Gawain

The last light of day     leaked over the horizon
as grim Gawain alone     stood guard on a hilltop
dominion defending     yet in desperation standing.
Foes about his feet      fell dead to ground
even as the sunset sapped      strength from blows.
The bastion of Arthur     on all sides beset
great foes withstood      as his strength waned
for captivity cared he not;      killed would he rather
than fail in his fealty     which always was foremost
all as nearer drew Arthur     his nephew seeking
bravery to reward     and recklessness condemn.

Battle was ending,    the enemy broken,
Mordred retreating     mercy to beg
fleeing the fight     even as Gawain fell.
‘Cross river to Camelot     the cowards fled
whilst upon the water     King Arthur wept
his greatest knight Gawain      now forever going
yet his liege’s lamentation     the son of Lot stirred.
For paper he pleaded     and penitent wrote
a letter to Lancelot,     old love now remembered.
‘Come to King’s aid,      for I counsel pardon.
the bravery of Ban’s kindred     badly is needed.
The treason of Mordred     to your mettle will yield.
Your king would have called you     but my counsel he heard.
For this sin I have suffered     and now I am slain.
Call Bors and Blamore,     Bleoberis and Ector
With might and sans mercy     the traitor to meet.
Now truly this time     is your fealty tested
but I know now     our great knight
Lancelot will not      be lacking found.’

All this he wrote     then glory waned
and great Gawain from this world     was forever gone.
The sun had set     with only sadness to come.
Over his death     was Arthur much distraught
swearing to eat     for sustenance only
pleasure in food     forsaken in grief
and all gaiety gone     until Gawain be avenged.
Morn came again     and onward the marched
yet something of the sun     seemed in it lacking.
Faithless cowards fled     with true king following
Pendragon purposeful     and puissant in wrath
a full fortnight passing    as the foe retreated
until king came to Camlann     his crown to regain.



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Of Arthur’s dream at Camlann

In dreams Arthur dwelt     as dark overcame
the king at Camlann      keeping his force
saw in his sleep     a nephew slain.
The ghost of Sir Gawain     with glory shining
appeared to Arthur     ere battle one night
keeping counsel as living     but caution forewarning
not Mordred to fight     the following morn.
Lancelot his letter     in love received
and swiftly he sailed     in ships lily-leafed
Arthur to join     and just place reclaim.
Ban’s kindred in battle     their king beside
alone was the way     to wash clean their sin
and this force only     foes would overcome.

Thus Arthur awoke     in awe at his dream
spirits powerful of those past     victory presaging
allies at sea     aid bringing
sovereignty in grasp seeming     as shores flanked the foe.
But king in his wisdom,       crown in sight,
Sir Gawain’s guidance     gravely he bore.
Early he armored      and arms he bore,
Caliburn at his side     as true king should wield
sword at waist slung     scabbard long lost.
Messengers he sent,     with Mordred to treat
briefly the battle      he thought best to delay.
Caitiff in cowardice     and cunning agreed
seeing in stoppage     his bind to ‘scape
not to tarry in this trap     after treaty was made.
Both swore that surcease      should last a month,
both bound by this      unless blade was drawn.

Yet dark was king’s destiny      and death it sought.
Ill-fated Sagramore spied      a serpent afoot
and with shining sword     the beast he slew
A reaction in reason     yet cause of great ruth.
Time was turned back     and treaty forgot
this day was death     for Arthur destined.

Worry not for wise king     nor wish ought else;
for the king that will come again     this cost must pay
for none can return      that never had left.
Rex quondam, rexque futurus,     his return presaged
in the words     on his tomb yet written.

With the whistle of blade     in wayward hand
 Once more began battle on      great Britain’s shores.
Marrac and Meneduc     mightily fought,
Brian and Baldwin      battered their foes
yet by Sagramore’s side     at day’s end lay slain.
Of all the court       at Camelot met,
the table round      of regent high
only brave Bedivere     the battle survived
Alone with Arthur       the field assaying.
King through the combat      had Caliburn seen,
the blessed blade      Britain protecting.

Faithless was fate,     the faithless protecting,
Mired in blood      still Mordred stood
His blade blemished    with the blood of his country.
His enemy to end     and insurrection with him,
Arthur advanced      Gawain to avenge
and all men slain     by Mordred’s black hand.
Caliburn met Clarent,     clashing at dusk
Dead fell the traitor     but the duel had its cost
Cruel Clarent finding its mark      on Arthur’s crown struck. 



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The departure of Arthur from the world of men

Dark drew nearer     as dusk began to fade.
Arthur on the field       had fallen
Bedivere knelt beside     bemoaning the death
of chivalry and great Camelot      on the fields of Camlann.
Arthur his gauntlet grasped     gasping through wounds
‘From Camlann carry me      and Caliburn bring
not long will I last      and a lake must you find
and into it Caliburn cast     ere I may cross
west and make my way     to that weird isle
Avalon called     that shall be Arthur’s rest.’

Bedivere took the blade     and along the brook
Caliburn he carried     yet thought to keep
the lake he found     but the blade left
in a hole hidden      hereafter to be retrieved.
Returning to Arthur     remorse not yet known
Bedivere to discover     his king he had betrayed.
Cold lay the king,     for Bedivere calling
‘tell me your tale     so your troth I may know.’
‘Caliburn I cast     deep into the cauldron
water washed o’er it     and only waves I saw.’
The good king cried out    ‘cur, you do lie
kingly Caliburn     you have kept.
Back, Sir Bedivere     or your king you betray.’

In ruth he returned     and sword he retrieved
but blade’s beauty        again left him bewitched.
To cast away the king’s blade     he thought a crime.
Again to Arthur      and the question was asked
and Bedivere lied     of what he saw in the lake.
Twice did he fail     and his troth break
but at last the blade holding     betrayed not his lord
and great Caliburn     into the lake he cast.
Amid fog and fen     his folly he saw
for waves on the water     white hand did make
as the blade it did catch      and singly brandish
then Caliburn disappeared     in the waters near Camlann.

To Arthur he went     and answered true
the Lady of the Lake     at last he had seen.
Arthur sighed      for too long had they stayed
And to the beach he begged      Bedivere to carry him.
Bravely he bore     his lord badly wounded
and on the shores of the west     a ship did he find.
Nine mirthless maidens      tearfully did man
The barge they had brought     to bear Arthur away
and foremost among them     was Morgan le Fay.
Into the water she waded      and loudly she wailed
‘truly too long      on land did you tarry.
Our utmost we’ll do     but unclear is your fate.’
Onto the barge     did they bear him
and in all speed     did they sail
over waves to the west     and out of the world.



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Of Lancelot’s return to England and subsequent departure

Lancelot at last     in Britain landed
to his liege he purposed     penitent seeking
but on field of battle     only Bedivere could he find
the bodies of comrades     alone burying.
Too late had he come     and liege failed
gone from the world      was Gawain his friend
and Arthur too     in Avalon slept
westward across the waves       his wounds to heal
ere he ever     to England return.

Beside Bedivere did     Ban’s kindred work
burying in earth      the bodies of friends.
Safir and Segwarides,     Saracen knights,
Esclabor’s sons     and Errac too
Griflet and Geraint        and Guingalain
the fair unknown      and Urien’s son Iwain
lastly Sir Lucan     did Lancelot bury
the Round Table’s remnants     laying to rest.
After this in abbey     did Bedivere abide
Ban’s kindred     to Benwick returning.
Lancelot alone     did they leave behind
toward Gales he rode     Guinever seeking.
The queen he found     but queer still she thought him.
Strange each found the other,      from self deemed they altered.
In grief they parted     Guinever to an abbey
Christ alone     would she keep
as wife     she would not.
Lancelot seeking last evils      across the land rode
Ere to Camlann he came again     where his great king fell.
A great bark he built      with Bedivere’s aid
And to sea he sailed      his king to seek.

This he swore     ere he sailed away
‘to Avalon will I go     Arthur to find
and with him return     else there remain
penance seeking     ‘part from the world.
Should I not find him     forever I’ll sail
but in faith I know     this time I’ll fail not
and with Arthur abide     in fair Avalon
until then is it time      and Britain’s need truest
then westward over waves     he shall wend.
If ever I’ll return      to England I know not
But I beside Arthur come I     or better not at all.’
And away did he sail     to the point of sunset
the hour of heroes    over horizon sinking
and never again in the land     was such a knight seen.

-Sam Sobel

2 comments:

DS said...

I was reading parts of this, and kept forgetting it wasn't actually written by Thomas Mallory or some 19th-century poet. Awesome vocabulary and authentic feeling of archaism!

Unknown said...

Wondrous bard weaving words with skill a fitting end fashioning to Tolkien's tale
That when the tides of time turn back back to Britain comes the king
For knight nor minstrel shall he lack of mighty Arthur all will sing.